Black Poetry : " feelin' legendary "

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm 20 " somethin "...
    alright i'm 29 the new age of wine...
    space and time
    gave me life and wisdom
    and a wife with its rhythm as we
    feel march's breeze across the state line...

    i'm feelin' legendary

    little boys will always come back to drink from many fountains
    when all they really need is to soul- swim
    in one river...
    i can teach an old dog new tricks
    i'll show him a mansion but for discipline give him a few bricks
    b/c building makes you a man indeed
    and w/o a plan to succeed you'll only be
    another one of the government's hand to feed
    and their kind of spoon is wood breed

    i'm feelin' legendary

    dry behind my ears
    surrounded by haters
    but they're surrounded by fears....
    trust that
    for the Creator only will i be grounded with tears...
    years can be long
    but if they are weak then they are lifeless...
    better short and strong
    that's why you must invest all aspects of life
    toward the unknown...




    stay tuned for " a poet's prison "
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Living Legend


    I can dig it! :terrific:
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes

    yes and it only gets better

    as you get smarter and stronger

    peace

    and if i can help with journey

    more the better

    i passed 29 yrs old (cough cough) some years back

    so i have alot to reference from lol

    GLAD TO SEE A REAL POET BACK
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release.....word up
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Settled into your groove, came into your own, not wet behind the ears any more, eyes not only on the prize, but touching it. So great to read you j'hiah, wonderfully written.
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .... So'ja, watz, 1poet, $R...

    what you all said- i heed it baby.

    let's rep '07 2gether...
     
  7. Bluewater

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    Hi j'hiah
    you have hit on so many points to a plan
    that would make one a legend in all domain
    digging the vibe my brother. :)
    Peace and Love
     
  8. Ikoro

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    Can I get an ASHE! :D

    Yes, King, that was divine.

    Keep the pen dripping.

    ~Ikoro
     
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