Black Poetry : feelin' left out on a friday night

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    friday night and i'm feelin' left out
    feelin' left out of your life
    want to do what's right
    be here with you after a hard week at work
    bein' with your significant other shouldn't hurt
    shouldn't be fighting the urge to flirt
    with others for attention
    would rather be with you, if you would only mention
    to me that you would rather be
    with me and the family
    then beaming up with scotty
    just because it's friday night
    just because you feel like it's your right
    because you are the family provider
    i would rather have you inside of
    me and have me callin' your name and restin' on your chest
    and then dealing with the rest
    but instead i see myself
    diggin' at others for attention
    can't even focus
    and did i mention that i talk to other men all the time
    i don't want to
    but i feel like you're not mine
    and they're all taken too
    so when the week is over guess what they do
    they go home and do what i wish that you would do
    and i find myself jealous
    jealous of what they have
    and what i wish that i had too
    but they have their spouses
    i just don't have you
    and once again it's friday night
    and i'm feelin' left out
    i wish for once instead of just coming home
    that you would come home to me
    on a friday night
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin u o' so true
    being left out can make one blue
    here's what i say to u
    in the gentle whispers of ya heart
    hold ya head up from da start
    let one know how self feel
    then see what's da deal
    love ur vibe u just scribe
    feel da pain it held inside

    take ya flyte upon me tonight
    i'll make u feel just right
    never alone under my wingz
    i am above the love sweet thing
    so dis friday don't feel blue
    come to me see what i have for u
    feel the compassion in my scribe
    and the love it pose in vibe
    i feel u on this note , do they think
    ur some joke ........

    tyteeeeeeeeeee flow RED
    dis friday me & u
     
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    WRITING ON THE WALL

    Express yourself! (Baby, you do it so well)

    As sung by Archie Bell & The Drells

    :heart:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice...very nice.

    mmm...mmm...mmmm....You're goooooddddddd. ;) :D

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    true indeed red
    thats what a husband is supposed to do
    keep you warm on friday nights
    instead of feeling blue...

    the best poems be the ones experienced first hand
    nice true scribe...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    come hear some of these great readings in voice tale every friday night
    in chat right here at www.destee.com/chat
     
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    I think a lot of folks were sleeping or "something" lol, this past Friday night. But anyway, wow, this piece was tight. I have been there, wanted to be with that someone who is supposed to be special. Only to feel that when he is there in body, his mind is off somewhere, anywhere....else. Emotively well written.
     
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