Black Poetry : feelin it

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 5, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a bit long...but take the journey ya'll...see if you feel it.



    ...whispering
    whispering softly in your ear
    mmm...
    kissing down your neck as i breathe your name
    over and over
    against your skin
    (closing my eyes, feeling your kiss)
    as i encircle your waist
    inhaling that fragile scent
    feeling all that is your spiritual essence
    (moaning softly)
    yes...yes...
    i kneel before you
    (gasp)
    placing delicate kisses that outling the shape of your breasts
    touching your head
    your hair
    caressing you
    mmm...your navel
    oh so soft thighs
    (opening myself to you...all that i am)
    (naked before you in every way)
    i brush my face against the purity of your soul
    licking its brilliance
    brilliance revealed in and thru darkness
    and wetness
    dancing upon rays of passion unfolding between our fingertips
    all that is the essence of life itself
    kissing you...mmm
    pulling the spirit from your "lips" to mine
    oh **** baby...oh yes
    pouring myself out for you
    feeding you
    i...i just want to touch the center of where you are
    feed me the nourishment of heaven
    find it...make your home there
    i build each moment with a taste of your dominion
    let me unleash all the passion and fury that is within me
    for you
    cupping my love to hold the falls of your grace
    i annoint my head with the blessing of love you've given me
    giving thanks to all that created you
    come up and share it with me
    let me taste it as well
    your wish is my desire
    my essence is on your lips
    you give it back to me...an offering
    to seal this moment in the stars
    dark, warm, moist...the stuff of life
    the stuff of nurture...of passion
    of flesh
    and it is glorious
    i consume you greedily
    yes baby...take me, give me your strength
    come...i shall lead you home
    i'll go...take me father than i've ever been
    farther than i've ever had courage to go
    push me beyond my borders...make me fly
    consume me and set me free
    upon wings of daynight destiny stroking tomorrows promise
    oh f#ck, oh hell yes...
    beyond metaphor to pure gutteral utterance where truth resides
    lighting a candle against the wind of oshun
    speaking in tongues of warm caress
    i won't let go
    don't let go, and don't let me get away
    be one in this enchanted dance as we move rhythmically
    each second a bass chord accentuated by sparkling highs
    push me as i push you
    to new heights, new depths
    until purity and carnality are merged as they were meant to be
    glorying fully in both
    i bow to you
    i submit my power...a gift
    accepting what is too beautiful to name
    feed it back to me, completing the circle
    in the garden of yin and yang we are one
    yes...oh yes...yes!
    the two halves become one in a gasp of todays forever
    whimpering sighs of desire
    touches in intimate embrace
    breaths of desparate togetherness
    as we share
    mmm...
    shall we do it again?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    D-Jay man dis flow is awesomely hot man she will love da night
    out wit ya woooooooweeeeeeee!! we need some water round
    here.........
     
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    You were right, it fits perfectly...flow ain't the word for it....and yin/yang ain't the half of it! It's cozmic-love scary. It's symbiotic synchronicity... It's the OM baby, complete in shape, sound and fulness. (But maybe you had to be there in order to fully appreciate!) It's heavy with the fruit of creation. And fruit is always sweetest when shared......don't you think? Thanks for recognizing poetry wherever you see it and speaking it into creation. Much much love to you. Always.

    Deepgrrl -- The New Kid on the Block Who's Almost Ready to Post
     
  4. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    connections of sublime suggestions that lift and touch...i too enjoyed this much. thanx for the read...
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is exquiste sensuality on a Friday evening....

    and I jess wanna thank ya!

    :heart:

    a
     
  6. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and to think alyce...the journey isn't over yet. stay tuned for the continuing sensuality as it unfolds, glad you liked...
     
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    h'ah mer-sayyy.....
     
  8. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL!...and the journey continues
     
  9. MOCHAMADNEZZ

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    dang derrick.. you are so nasty..soo nasty in a good way..i m abs loving this...you know, i feel a ROADTRIP cumming up really soon..
     
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    Uhmmmm... (trying to catch breath)
    D... This was :hot: ! I don't know how else to describe it.

    I have to find the name of some awesome artist to compare you to for you have painted a picture that speaks volumes....

    You are on it!!!! Stay on it.

    Much :heart:
     
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