Black Poetry : feelin it

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 9, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the moon is danceing
    with the stars
    and the stars
    are doing a funky tango
    with the twilight wind
    the twilight wind is flirting
    with the dawn,the dawn,
    is teaseing the sun
    and the sun is kissing
    the blue sky
    but blue sky
    is in love with
    the swirling clouds
    and the
    swirling clouds
    are mesmerized
    by the afternoon winds
    song that whispers
    to the night to come
    softly....
    and when it does...
    they do it all again
     
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    Hey story
    i am liking this...
    a nature party...
    this is wonderful...
    i am feeling this..
    very nice
    Peace
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS BLU YOU YOURSELF ARE AND INSPIRATION, I LOOK UP TO
     
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    Story, I love it... this ain't just chit-chat about the weather!
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 1poet, for coming through and taking time to read my poetry.
     
  6. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is on FIRE Anna. Very creative, perfect, and it flows girl.... it flows!! Eye luv it!!
     
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