Black Poetry : FEELIN...Eve....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SUNkissed, Aug 21, 2003.

  1. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    testing the waters... peace to everyone in the forum....
    I call this.....


    ......feelin Eve....



    What fascination could dwell...
    in a garden perfect..
    a force -- elusive yet acknowledged.. with the power and ability
    to satisfy ... want UNKNOWN.....

    How Sssssweet The Fruit

    premeditated.......

    I started a fight...
    to make sure
    that I
    can talk to you tonight

    excited
    because I know
    when we get together..
    how the riversssssss
    ..........flow

    entangled
    in the WEB....
    I weave
    KNOWING
    I could NEVER
    leave.

    evading
    my consciousness
    I 'd rather have
    another kissssssss

    LYING
    to myself
    I want you more
    than anyone else

    abandoned
    in the mirror
    she speaks
    of WISDOM
    but I just
    won't hear her.

    FUTILE
    I am in too deep
    thinking of you.....
    interrupting
    sleep..

    QUESTION.......
    what could this be
    growing
    between you
    and me?

    solution?

    for NOW
    I know
    I just don't want
    to let you go.
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
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    WELCOME :) SUNkissed (love the name :) )

    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
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    yessssssss...this was too sweet :)
    I hope ya hit us wit some more sweetness :)
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I am sooooooooooo loving your style.........will definitely look for
    more of you as you...premeditate.......excited... entangled...
    evading... Lines of Poetic questions and solutions... that
    captivate our mental canvas...

    Wonderful work!
    Angelic
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love & peace
    welcome from above as i bless this scribe
    u vibe
    i'm so much feeling u
    this was awesome flowin' look to read more of u
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
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    These waters run mighty deep... WELCOME!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Sunkissed :wave: Welcome :wave:
    your poem is truly wonderful
    enjoying it fully
    looking forward to reading more
    Peace
     
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    DANNNNGGGGGG

    :eek: :jawdrop: this is beautiful I love it!
    welcome to destee's we are glad to have u here,
    and hope u enjoy ur stay,

    much love,

    the daughter of light,
    -story
     
  8. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast:

    Thank you all for reading my.... words... And also for the warm welcomes.... that is just too much.. I am loving this space.. I love to read .. what people think about... I did read some HOT stuff in here.... action words!!... (ramble).

    Triniti424
    Angelicsage
    $$RICH$$
    1Poetsought
    BlueWater
    Story
    you all made me feel so good
    Thank you for making my day.:eek: ....and BACK at you!!!
     
  9. MORE

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    FUTILE
    I am in too deep
    thinking of you.....
    interrupting
    sleep..


    THAT WAS A TIGHT VIBE, STR8 LOSING SLEEP MANNNNN I KNOW!
    :toast: :toast: :toast: :( :eek: :cool:
     
  10. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your DAPS.. More.. MUCH APPRECIATED....and HEY?!?!?!...why does your avatar make me wanna do what he is doin?LOL
     
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