Black Poetry : Feel with me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by moham, May 19, 2005.

  1. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life turned softer with days, slowly brighter
    My heart, more than a little lighter. I handed you a tear,
    and received a sincere smile.
    Everything, was going to be all right.

    Unfortunately indeed, it has been a while…
    this image..
    …of a man,
    taking genuine interest, showing true sympathy
    occasionally pleasantly surprised
    …of this man convincing me, that love is near
    reassuring me not to fear.

    To let go of the fears.
    Promise, I won’t hurt you. He said
    to follow my heart and read the directions
    My destiny would unfold itself..

    To let go of fear,
    since its paranoia and numbness were to consume me,
    entirely.

    We laughed heartily.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice enjoyed it thanks for sharing apart of you with us

    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling the depth of it very nice poet !
     
  4. Poetrymama

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    re:Feel

    Very nice write.
     
  5. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for sharing..
     
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    hi moham
    wonderful poem
    I was capture by the sincerity
    reflected in your poem
    this is a very
    lovely
    Peace
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, this piece just seemed to have flowed freely out of your pen, it had a real openess about it. Appropriate title too. So nice to read something new from you.
     
  8. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey thanks everyone (MzBlkAngel, Rich, Poetrymama, Godssoulja, Bluewater and Watzinaname),

    for reading and for your kind comments!!

    :heart:
    moham
     
  9. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with Sis bleuwater...


    this was beautifull..




    you :picture:



    :kiss2:









    LoveAuroraflower:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    congratulation poet of the week..
     
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