Black Poetry : Feel the Same.....as You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 3, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If what you say is true
    I feel the same way too
    But I only know of you
    To touch
    To feel
    Have never been
    Reality is us
    As my heart turns
    My tears run…
    For I feel deep
    And you have no clue
    Of the love I hold inside..
    But knows of me from afar..
    Knowing I am that star
    But dancing alone
    In a lonely dream of two
    It’s our first time….
    Shyness of two fear of hurt
    Backs away then pulls forward
    Wondering if this is a illusion or
    Maybe it’s all a delusion
    Confusion of being
    Captive
    Captivated
    Intense
    Lost in you hoping you’re lost in me
    Yet you touch me as if you know me
    But not a clue of what really lays…
    At times I feel your thoughts
    As you do mine…
    So if what you say is true….
    I want to feel it
    Tears fall more then you know…
    For I took your hand…
    In this dance of romance…
    If what you say is true
    I feel the same way too
    Lets make our destiny
    Our dynasty!!!!
    Are you ready?
    For I confess I feel the same
    As you…

    (C) 2004
    BlackAngel
     
  2. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strong emotion in this piece. I also felt the hesitation. Keep flowing!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DEEP FEELINGS FLOWING FROM DA INNER EMOTIONS
    tyte drop well felt
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ireadastory..thank you for the love....

    $$RICH$$..thank you for letting me know how ya felt it....and the love you give

    peace
    Angel
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emotive deep drop.
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ'n

    TIGHT DROP!!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks python and watz for the love on dis
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a very nice flow MzBlk. I really enjoyed reading this. Like $$RICH$$ and Watz said: This is deep.. worth another :read:

    :luvv:
     
  9. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :smokin: :smokin: :smokin:
    this is some heavy...d*mn...
    now i aint sure what's happenin'
    but whatever it is
    it's THICK...

    all i gotta say
    is...
    tight flow MBA
     
  10. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES sista very deep drop, always a pleasure to read
     
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