Black Poetry : Feel The music

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lights burning into my soul
    the click of the beat of the drums Vs. the beat of my heart
    the powerful words are etched into my eyes
    each breath is like a spark
    the switch on of the guitar is like the beginning of life
    feel the music

    my voice carries out to all the screaming fans
    or is this an empty room
    I can only take one glance
    soon the intro is ended and the song begins
    the bass rumbles the ground
    where my feet are held tight
    so as i dont loose my way in the beat of this sound
    feel the music

    screaming into the mic
    so as they understand
    i wrote this song for meaning
    and to all my heartbroken fans
    feel the music

    don't just listen
    breath it
    embrace it
    control it
    make it ur own
    but don't let others steel it
    hide it in ur soul
    i can see my friends and enemies from my
    school screaming high above the rest
    i have tried for months before this
    to ace this song
    now is the true test
    to see where i belong
    on THE STAGE
    or back home

    Suddenly i blink and all of this is gone...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done and i'm sure it will revisit ya soul again !
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what an heartfelt poem hey when you get a chance revisit your strangers within i left you something ohh a while ago!!!!!!!!!!!! keep them flo's coming babygurl!!!!:spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    This was beautiful
    I was loving this drop
    Much Love poet
     
  5. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU JUST PUT THE WHOLE LOVE OF MUSIC IN THAT POEM. FEELING THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF ON THIS ONE CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE
     
  6. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I likes this one here.
    Very nice.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I likes this one here.
    Very nice.
     
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