Black Poetry : Feel The Color All Within

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Feel the color within and around
    hear the gentle surround
    feel the blackness of souls
    as it unleashed and be crown
    unbound the beauty
    of blackness in it's stride
    feel da walks of joy
    inside where it never hide

    blackness in the rhythm of walk
    speaks reality when it talk
    like the beat of ancient drums

    feel the pulsating of pride
    too strong to ignore
    yet powerful too be deny
    feel the color all within deep
    the beauty of darkness
    when u sleep
    the orbs of far regions
    cast unto u a spell
    where ya heart lay and dewell

    blackness very strong
    revealing it's mysteries
    in ryhthm & song
    listen to the laughter
    but shiver at it's screams
    rapture of bliss to
    a bling bling !!

    from injustice and denied dreams
    whispers of words fill the glory
    of the bound beauty of darkness
    where we lay
    this be another poetic word play
    mental mind
    wash me ova
    cover my thoughts to
    a vision in da dark
    blackness of beauty
    deep in my chamber
    ever so humble
    forth my pen speak
    to light and never crumble
    feel the color all within
    let the sweet music ring
    from da poet's pen

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  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    I really like this one!! Great flow!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poetically thankz sis....
     
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    onelove1soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I'm feelin' this, beautiful, $$Rich$$.
     
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    I really REALLY like this piece. I'm feelin the music from your pen:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    onelove1 ...............thankz u seem to bless me with sweet words

    Alizentang...............thankz da music of a pen it powerful
     
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    Master poet this is beautiful like all of your flows, I really like this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz coz i live inside your work
    ur hand is mighty sistah
     
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    hey RICH
    feeling the color
    of the flow
    that is part
    of our soul
    very nice vibes
    Peace
     
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    rich
    this piece stirred my heart
    all of this is tru
    peace
    khasm
     
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