Black Poetry : feel so much betta

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Mar 19, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feel so much betta
    cause it's offa my chest
    the rest
    can just flex and fall into place
    space
    mind and flow
    me and you have nowhere to go
    there's no forward motion
    no commotion
    no body in this vast ocean
    nothing but time and space between us
    and birth
    and elements
    and life
    once snuffed
    and life
    once again
    stars aligned
    and birthdays and signs
    and childrens names all intertwined
    with mine
    and what is that all about
    some subliminal **** no doubt
    but me and you have nowhere to go
    there's no forward motion
    no commotion
    no body in this vast ocean
    all we have is the past
    keep in touch baby boy
    keep in touch
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tears....
     
  3. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you cindy and rich...yes, endings are sad, but sometimes necessary.
     
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