Black Poetry : Feel me da Beat

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Now it tyme i bring it real
    and a love ya heart can feel
    when u flow in hope to sweet
    understanding and how words
    are landing to capture
    and flow in da rapture
    feeling da embrace as it trace
    da essence of the beat
    da gift of thy Father giving
    to spread the mission of unity
    in the loyal community as we
    bond under the 7th sun
    i cast the cares upon da pen
    feel me deep within as i move
    and remove da myth replace it
    wit warm love lace GOD has
    open the path to the gates
    of glory and holds the key
    to every drip of ink soft & meek
    we lay at hand to meet the task
    poetry of poetic flava will
    forever last
    feel the joy it bring and how
    words seem to sing
    so flow inside this magical ride
    let ya ink flow of heart
    set the tone between right and wrong
    as the beat of flow open ya know
    come join me
    come as u are
    come together
    we are the people of the people
    for the people in a poetic
    blaze as it amaze da soul
    fel me as the love unfold
    :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    inside this magical ride
    very nice drop loving the flow
    i wanna another ride
    Peace Angel
     
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    :jumping: Rich...I Would Love This Magical Ride Very Much! :roll:

    feel the joy it bring and how
    words seem to sing
    so flow inside this magical ride
    let ya ink flow of heart
    set the tone between right and wrong
    as the beat of flow open ya know
    come join me
    come as u are
    come together
    we are the people of the people
    for the people in a poetic
    blaze as it amaze da soul
    fel me as the love unfold


    Thanks for flowing me into your poetic world.

    ~j
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz angel and Joyce
    poeticly on the waves
    we voice in ink to caress
    the lovin hearts and souls
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowing to the beat of unity, letting the pen blaze the trail. Very positive scribe here Rich.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH,
    excellent flow and invitation
    feeling the vibe.....
    of the magical ride....

    the heart spills ink upon the page
    dishing out the love, bringing peace to the rage
    explaining the situation opening the way
    for the continuation to liberation in this day
    so many trials we've faced and overcome
    those of today that make so many numb
    will fall to the wordz of the poet and the sage
    who spills the healing ink upon this healing page

    Peace and Blessings....flow on....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz indeed i try to reach out

    my brutha Rasheed
    indeed u nailed it wit wisdom & upmost
    thankz
     
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    "Words seem to sing".....

    I love that line, Brother Rich. Tight!!
     
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    thank u sistah Queen ya words singing in a sweet tune
     
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    yes
    move me
    i feel the beat
    the jungle deep
    as it reach into my soul
    to let it soar
    into the mythical shine of the light
    within the grace
    the Lord by my side
    i need not hide
    it's ok to cry
    I love from the heart
    all creatures
    Great and small
    feeling the joy
    letting it go
    letting it go
    feeling the joy
    capture
    inthe rapture
    of the land
    celebrating
    as i let
    my love
    unfold
    to the world
    our words
    will be told

    Wonderful flow my brother
    it just open me up
    wow..thank you
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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