Black Poetry : feel me 2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diva08, Aug 17, 2001.

  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he said
    if you can't write about nothing
    write about life
    so what do you do if you dream all day?
    staring at the screen wasting your life away?
    dismissing the words
    they get in the way
    so i want you to feel this
    when i say...

    feel me
    please
    understand me
    please
    me

    oh blessed dream
    materialize
    so i can feel
    someone
    unimagined
    and he can feel
    what i have stored
    just for him

    beloved
    come close
    breathe with me
    smile with me
    embrace with me
    let your heart beat with mine
    throb
    with me

    come
    closer
    closer
    its' a perfect fit

    i want you
    inside me
    so we can produce
    living
    breathing
    crying
    smiling
    love

    my dream manifest
    "greater love
    hath no man than this..."
    you are my friend
    and i would die for you
    so i could dream about you
    eternally

    diva08
    (c) 2001
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    diva, I'm loving this......welcome back.
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    hey Diva

    how have you been?


    this was very good

    keep flowin'

    pd
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms Diva....So good to see yo uagain

    BE
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diva!

    more, please.


    a
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my young, sis...

    i've missed u!

    you writing speaks...
    tell us more about what
    resides on the mind of
    our sistas....
     
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