Black Poetry : Feeding At The Trough

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look at me get all I can
    Look at ya'll pigs
    In the pen
    Look at you,
    And what do you see
    Taking more than even me

    I got mine to wine and dine
    Pay in kind for my behind
    Got a mind to blow my wad
    Turning out my enterprise ~

    Get behind me I come first
    Quench my thirst so I can burst
    Come to worst my suicide
    Might upset the little wife

    I've been there and I've done that
    Moving on up... don't look back
    Colored folk know I ain't Black
    B.E.T. done gave me dapz


    Darryl Abdu Omari :?:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    as always loving ya sytle my brother
    keep on bringing it!!!!!
     
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    This was a pretty cool piece man. I can see you spittin this in front of a spoken word crowd. Very different from the norm I see around here. Nice concept and all. Feeling that last line espeically.

    One luv
     
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    love this one u scribe a picture of greatness
     
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    Nice drop, keep em coming
     
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    What debate?
     
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