Black Poetry : Feeble Heads

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeble Heads

    These flames ran through nations like trains out of transportation all fright
    Leaving destruction and devastation, productions and revelation in railroads like
    A fail load of explosives carried by locomotives at night
    This domination is like an accommodation on a 747 flight
    It rise then flies and skies so buckle seatbelts as this reach heaven’s height //
    My purpose is like a circus it entertain fans and make brains expand
    Train beasts but I came in peace whipping elephant is an irrelevant plan
    Like Barnum and Ringling just jingling opinions on animal laws //
    Look I get disapproval on bliss crap removal so my hands tied
    My Plans died on this project had to retreat, so my fans cried //
    My rhymes are precision like shrines in religion so kneel down //
    Feel ground holy, best to preach, bless the beach and reveal bounds
    To twist a rap situation is like a misapplication it don’t work
    Won’t perk on paper, jerk try taper true script but can’t hurt
    It with needle and threads, feeble head become angry and pervert //
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop madd
    continue on
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel thanks for responding to this right here
     
  4. Bluewater

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    hi:wave:
    feeling your poem , about how it is to be a entertainer, and the display we all go through in this flow
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater thanks for the props
     
  6. Azula

    Azula Active Member MEMBER

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    MADD

    Your hurting the people :lol: Keep the flow coming my man
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    Keep on droppin your Madd rhymes
     
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    Azula and Nita thanks for the props for real yo
     
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