Black Poetry : fed up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Dec 9, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this a poem i wrote back in spring 2k1

    every now and then i go thru my old flows and see how lifes and my writing has evolved

    btb soon

    Fed Up
    You are sitting alone in your room, like where could this man be
    You sat there in the dark for three hours, outcasted your family
    You felt as if you were the blame, your actions caused this pain
    You were a victim of the game; your feelings will never be the same
    You gave him so much and he gave you so little
    You invested so much time, only for him to leave your heart brittle
    You say to yourself but he said he loved me last night on the phone
    You were a victim of what you wanted to hear but you can’t condone
    You let him into your heart, gave him your most precious possession
    You now sit alone in confession, blinded by your own obsession
    You look at your hand, glancing at that promise he gave you
    You say why does he evade you, you let his words enslave you
    You were hypnotized by his voice, the way that he talked
    You never noticed his glimpses at other women when yall walked
    You reminisce upon your first kiss, how he gave you bliss
    You let him tell you how much he wasn’t bother by other women, he told you this
    You were the one, called you sweet you were so innocent
    You told him the same, in his mind he’s thinking, magnificent
    You pick up a shirt he left over; remember how you used to place your head on his chest
    You remember how you used to call him, take away your stress
    You’re getting angry, your emotions are mixed, and you’re confused
    You feel as if life was electricity, you’re about to blow a fuse
    You got hurt because you were curious, so impatient, couldn’t wait
    You are alone now, the new man, you hold back, because it’s men that you hate
    You are afraid to open your heart; you feel that it can’t be repaired
    You flirt with emotion, dissing the potential and leave them impaired
    You only knew the pain that you cause and the effect
    You hurt the lonely, stay watchful of the bad, but don’t neglect
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feel ya on dis piece tyte scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was i tight piece..
    feel this..wow.:angel1: