Black Poetry : Fed Up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by icandi, Nov 17, 2003.

  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i had a dollar for everytime i heard a black man say
    this is a white mans world
    i would be richer than bill gates and oprahs love child
    this talk about why we are so bound
    in what have labeled america
    the home of the free and the brave
    how our ancestors slaved for the rights
    of the future generations who act like they too good to try harder
    wanting people to place everything in their hand
    cause their mantality has not yet graduated out of the box
    so they still act like they have corn pops for brains
    see this is the stuff that pisses me off
    im fed up

    what about those baby mamas
    that insist on making the daddys suffer
    cause she decided to cheat
    and now even though she cant take care of the child
    she wont give him custody
    and those daddys who dont care
    about where their child will end up next
    but still manages to get mad when another man takes up time
    thats some bull **** to the third power
    and that suff pisses me off
    thats why im fed up

    tick tock
    that ****** in jail again
    beatin on his gal and his kids
    selling rocks to family members not giving a ****
    and he still wonders why he cant make it in this world today
    instead of hustlin he should be accomplishing his dreams the american way
    this is the reason why i dont entertaine
    ingorance from someone who aint trying to do better
    money is a good asset but there is a better way to gain wealth
    why wont he take pride in himself
    i know he is better than that
    and that **** really pisses me off
    thats why im still fed up

    yes im fed up
    with black people today worried about all the wrong thangs
    like who j lo is married too and who bow wow dates
    what about the facts that we dont learn in school
    like isis, osiris, and horus the ancestors of our past
    and why in thier right had was an ankh showing they had power
    and in thier left was papyrus
    and why was thier skin the color of sand
    and why without black people america whould have suffered
    and africa yes africa would be the most industrialized nation
    but my people are just to lazy and realize the wealth in thier blood
    im fed up with our black race neglecting to learn
    im fed up
    im fed up
    im fed up
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my i feel ya here
    let it all out , let it be heard
    flow on
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speakin loud i hear you...
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...you are deep girl......real deep....
    i'm feelin ya here........you made some good points....but you shouldnt let tha
    ignorance of others stress you out....
    its a battle,unfortunately,you'll lose.......but we must recognize...

    onelove.....