Black Poetry : feb

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Feb 17, 2012.

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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One more before the months out​
    How we just love to sore​
    Yes this is the celebration of blacks in amerikkka​
    So the only thing to do is to be sore abot the misteps that have and r happenin​
    Thankful for thw ways and soldiers that helped us make it through​
    To now​
    Where we stand wondering​
    OK​
    now that this earth has become a dome that can only hold one​
    So we supposidly gonna all come together​
    When the story becomes to long to withstand​
    Tha reply becomes we've done all that can be done​
    Knowing good and Weel​
    It's only a matter of time before balance prevails​
    So lets face up to this month​
    I am another cult ure then you​
    But​
    We all must come together to get to the moon of​
    Originality and Truth.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Dear Sister Candeesweet,

    Brilliant! I love the speakers matter of fact but silky tone.

    There are several lines I love but particularly:

    "How we just love to sore"

    and

    "now that this earth has become a dome that can only hold one"

    Wow, love that line.

    "now that this earth has become a dome that can only hold one"

    You create some of the most inventive lines I've ever read.

    Your originality, voice and style are uniquely yours. Truly enjoyed reading this peace. Thanks for sharing.

    (smile)
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TotalView I am totally (no punt intended :) humbaled by your words of encouragement! I llove tht you enjoy me as much as I enjoy you, Sis!

    "You already Know" $RICH$
     
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    I truly love your work and not just because I love you. You have a beautiful and refreshing gift. Thanks for sharing it.

    (smile)