Black Poetry : Feast on grocery while writing a piece of poetry bitter pure

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Dec 19, 2011.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feast on grocery while writing a piece of poetry bitter pure

    Literature my mixed rhymes fix minds have to find a cure

    Groove nightly as I move slightly to stardom trying to allure

    Fans, this stuff has correct potions that effects emotions and

    Stir feelings but I prefer healing whackness on ocean and land

    When I blunder in art that’s when the thunder start and it rain

    In my brain it’s hard to maintain my thought pattern stuff drain

    My energy, to fall is a tragic must call on magic like hocus pocus

    And stay focus need a true Jeannie or a whodini and like locust

    Hop on a crop with an appetite from the warm region and dodge

    Storm seasons face feeble aggression, legal profession comes large

    Come with lame power and like a main tower got walls tall like

    Castles get all type of hassles but continue to drop hyped

    Verses, kid legal online with medeval rhymes yeah prevails

    well and put cats in jail cells and the bale fell due use nails

    to tack up posters, got facts in hoster like the guns of quick

    Draw Mcgraw, hardcore thug and try soar above the slick

    Ones with sick tons of rhymes developing in my beloved brain

    keep my head up go in the street and spread luck and fame

    fakes soft have to scrape them off sidewalks so my pride talk

    have to hide or get caught doing wrong dudes lied not my fault

    my flow unravel when I go travel to microphone now on gravel
    going home,
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice script
     
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    Brother Poet rhymebad,

    Brilliant!!! I ab-so-lute-ly love...and I do mean LOVE this piece!

    "microphone now on gravel
    going home,"

    Ha!
    Standing Ovation! <clapping>

    (smile)
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    (sending rhymebad a contract)

    I got them tracks if ya need it, brova. you are genius. consistently innovative.
     
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    lyrical creativity
    make music
    poetically
    itself! Nice Post Poet!
     
  6. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow thankis everybody fo rth eprops on this one for real
     
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