Black Poetry : Fear

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  1. witerboy

    witerboy New Member MEMBER

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    fear


    When it rain it just darkness when it pitch black with no light it just my fear
    When I pray for you to get better but it just nothing I can to do
    I see you running in the torn patches I wait for you to come but it just nothing I can do
    I see you in a glomming way I try to see how are u
    When you run through the house not facing you fear each time you cut yourself your
    blood run through like a red river
    Your heart went to a black cold hearted little girl that what to face her fear
    When it rain the blackness cover the whole body with fear and darkness

    The puddle turn black and your fear are in it
    You see us playing all the time but I thought you just forgot us
    I think you have bad dream and your fear are chasing after you
    When I run after you it stop at the end of the ground and sea
    When you cry I try to cheer you up but it don’t work
    Why are u doing this is it your fear or you hate yourself
    When the time go on it want to stop you fear will chased you all the time
    If you cant face you fear i will face it beside your side with you


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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
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    i just wanted to encourage you to keep up the good work, and welcome to the house.......................get comfortable.... :x:
     
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    welcome poet....
    please share more of your insight with us because
    i really dug your first joint....
    one love
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    I love the last line most of all!!

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    Welcome to the fold poet and yes, Please keep your pen in motion!

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