Quiet Poetry Lounge : Fear

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fear

    You fear me because of the dynamic appeal and hypnotic delayed

    effect that hidden truths hide with simple lies…averted eyes with

    hurried glances leading to dreams without sleeping.

    Deep are the ways of interaction that give way to the dull ache of

    a touch that never quite satisfies thoughts of the perfect

    encounter in a kindred yearning of a love bizarre…I am forced to

    be left totally incomplete.

    Yet the most complete thing that could ever happen between us

    is complete denial…complete denial denying the most complete

    union completing the most natural state a man and woman could

    ever share.

    Quiet love loudly calls out to me from lips moist with questions

    that may only be asked while being kissed, tasted, and tested.

    Remember me as you try to forget what made you forget to

    remember what made you lose yourself inside that wonderful

    what if that was me…what if time stood still watching a stolen

    kiss taken while standing on a hill of desire…what if fields of

    jasmine and clover concealed the true answer to a lovers

    question that can never be asked…what if morning made love to

    midnight and yesterday created a tomorrow that inspired a

    blissful buffet set before lovers and disguised is as today?


    Would you still fear me?


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! this was very tyte
    love how u did dis one
     
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    this is wonderful
    yes indeed
    nice flow
    Peace
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Hell no I wouldn't fear you...bring it to papi, mami. :D

    This is tight...

    Nice...very nice.

    You should come to voicechat and read it to your family. We'd love to hear it.

    :toast: :D
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol..Q1 is all man...


     
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    If the impossible became a reality, would we still fear what seems too good to be true. Perhaps, if we are scared of being hurt, but how else will we discover Eden? Reads like a love that anyone could only hope to discover...beautiful.
     
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