Black Poetry : Fear

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fear


    You fear me because of the dynamic appeal and hypnotic delayed

    effect that hidden truths hide with simple lies…averted eyes with

    hurried glances leading to dreams without sleeping.

    Deep are the ways of interaction that give way to the dull ache of

    a touch that never quite satisfies, with thoughts of the perfect

    encounter in a kindred yearning of a love bizarre…I am forced to

    be left totally incomplete.

    Yet the most complete thing that could ever happen between us

    is complete denial…complete denial denying the most complete

    union completing the most natural state a man and woman could ever share.



    Quiet love loudly calls out to me from lips moist with questions

    that may only be asked while being kissed, tasted, and tested.



    Remember me as you try to forget what made you forget to

    remember what made you lose yourself inside that wonderful

    what if that was me…what if time stood still watching a stolen

    kiss taken while standing on a hill of desire…what if fields of

    jasmine and clover concealed the true answer to a lovers

    question that can never be asked…what if morning made love to

    midnight and yesterday created a tomorrow that inspired a

    blissful buffet set before lovers and disguised is as today?
    Would you still fear me?
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man dis is tyte
    and a deep flow
    i welcome u to destee just got here myself
     
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    Essential...I see you've blessed us with another Great Piece!
    Feeling your flow...fa sho!

    My fav part : Quiet love loudly calls out to me from lips moist with questions that may only be asked while being kissed, tasted, and tested.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmmmmmm! now this scribe was str8 awesome
    the depth and warmth
    keep flowin
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** boo....
    you've been with us for such a short time....
    but i already am in love with your style.....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    "what if morning made love to

    midnight and yesterday created a tomorrow that inspired a

    blissful buffet set before lovers and disguised is as today?"


    TRUELY BEAUTIFUL! im likin your style. can't wait to read more.
     
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    Nice flow. Quinessential1

    This is deep. Coming in and out , leaving desires. Fears of commitment. Being enveloped.

    " Yet the most complete thing that could ever happen between us is complete denial…complete denial denying the most complete
    union completing the most natural state a man and woman could ever share. "
     
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    I feel ya Quinessential1

    ...some are so fearful to once again let down the guard...to open their heart...to the possibilities that love may start...to take over them...they fail to realize love is the ultimate goal...which turns to halves to whole...combining mind, spirit, thought, body & soul...they fail tor truly answer the questions...which could make deep impressions...upon their heart and mind...maybe one day they will open up and find...love is a gift from the divine...whether with open eyes or taken blind...
     
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