Black Poetry : Fear killer ("the Genesis", or pt I)

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inside
    I swell
    With angst
    Desperation
    Bitterness and maybe guile
    All the while
    Looking for balance
    To keep from burying my talent
    Like the wicked servant
    In Jesus' parable
    So terrible
    When fear manipulates
    Torments and stipulates
    So many, so often
    Filling many coffins
    With zombies and corpses
    Who married life then divorced it
    Now dead with no alimony
    Just "mourners" who are phony
    Fear will strike again
    Probably the next of kin
    The serial killer whose silent
    Leaving no trace of his violence
    Or does it????
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa dis was deep and tyte
    the question is does it.......
    flow on
     
  3. Bluewater

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    gosh this was wow..
    scarey 2
    flow on

    nice one
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    flow on...
    dis was deep
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love

    Rich- it does...check part III(postin' soon)
    Bluewater- didn't mean to scare I'll do better
    Angel- so deep, so deep it is my sister
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep he leaves traces...


    look at the world......
    look around you ....
    look beside you....



    this was beautifull post....
    an eyeopener for people ....

    and welcome twision :wave:



    Love libertylady...
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fear can do so much to undo a soul, I wouldn't say this was scary, but you did lay some images down that got our attention.
     
  8. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    more love???? what;s a brother 2 do
    Liberty- You gettin' all into the next post...pt II lol
    Whatziname- Now that I got yall's attention.........
     
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