Quiet Poetry Lounge : favored dream

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Feb 16, 2012.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    walking around in a dream
    searching for a river to climb
    and a tree to bathe in
    doesn't matter, water is water

    climbing hand over hand, lose my grip
    swan dive into leaves, swim and kick
    doesn't matter, survival is survival

    stand up, ground solid beneath feet
    water and a branch in my palms, stretching to the sky
    can't determine the proper way to swim and kick or to climb

    doesn't matter, God sends a squirrel and a fish to guide me
     
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    Sink or swim count me in...

    I'm yours!

    :bye:
     
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    My heart is glad.
    *crickets*

    (smile)
     
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    Precious? Who's the little fat round sad M&M looking guy, walking like he lost his best friend? And what pray tell is his sad behind doing in my wonderful and loving response from you? Can you please make him go away forever? Thank you. Oh, goodness...I forgot about the *crickets*
    You are my heart, Precious...please believe.

    (smile)
     
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    "doesn't matter, God sends a squirrel and a fish to guide me"
    That is Preciously true! Love It!
     
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    God is Preciously true! Love you!

    (smile)
     
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