Black Poetry : Faultless

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  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gazing into your big brown eyes,
    Innocence...
    So sublime but unaware of it.
    So young and yet so disadvantaged
    Scarred by a disease ... incurable
    Your blood is poison.. or so they tell you
    But u dont understand why
    No, its not your fault
    But here you are
    Intelligent and Yes, you could have made it big in life
    You dont know that your birth
    Was your very own death sentence
    YOu dont know that I am asking myself questions like:
    God, why my little heart, this adorable baby?
    But you my love,
    And all the other beautiful angels like you
    Are blessed with love...
    No, its not a curse
    But why the sickeness, the pain, the suffering??
    You look back, big brown eyes...
    Clutch your chest as you cough in agony
    You cant bear the pain and yet
    YOu take it like a champ.
    Its not your fault
    But as you look up into mama's eyes...
    Your big brown eyes tell her,
    You still love her
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release the beauty of this was awesome
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, what can happen to even the most innocent of lives, this was a heart wrenching, tender flow.
     
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    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love it

    :bowdown: :bowdown:
    I love this poem. ;)
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww. this is so emotive and touching. blessings to you
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to you all for the positive feed back and lets help to make this disease extinct... its all up to us. much love and nuff respect!