Black Poetry : Father's Day !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Father's more then dad's
    bigger then making it be
    happy smiling see
    father's day coming

    not deadbeats
    can't be a father to thee
    this day not yo treat
    but trust me ur have yo day
    not in dis way
    but deeper den dis

    Father's is a man
    whom stride
    wit great pride
    cross lines of fire
    for his children desires
    the greatest gift one can get
    not ties , shirts , and ect......
    but the gift of GOD in his heart

    he get the moment to shine
    fathers never leave
    children behind
    o'my how blind
    the smile of their face
    when they see dad everyday
    how he protect his little gurl
    cuddle her in comfort
    a father is one whom
    spend some time wit his son
    ball playin' having fun
    father's love is a contact
    if ya not real
    u can't relate to dat !
    and brutha dat's whack
    get on back
    i say Happy Father's day toooooo all the men
    not the fake one's
    not the one wit jokes
    dis stuff will leave u to choke
    as true father's going for broke
    to give self child a worth da while


    MAKING A BABY DON'T MAKE U A FATHER
    BUT TO SEE TO CHILD WELL BEINGS & LOVE
    IS A FATHER ..............

    :D
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich,

    This is a wonderful and beautiful piece. I agree with you 100%!! I am lucky my father is such a man!! I cherish having him as my father every day of my life. If you dont mind, I'd like to share this poem with him on Father's day!! I know he'd love it!!

    This is beautifully expressed!! BRAVO!!

    Simply, a wonderful touching poem!! :toast: :toast: :toast:

    ~Sierra~:heart::kiss:
     
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    i love it....glad i droped by today!
     
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    father figure! yes this was tight indeed!:toast:
     
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    this is good, this is father
    Peace
     
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    Rich..nice piece...It makes me think of my wonderful father who is no longer here. Thanks for the memories.
     
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    So much wisdom in this piece!
    I gotta give props to my dad
    who's putting up with me now
    as I try and get my life back to
    some semblance of good!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    beautiful piece :)... you speak much truth in your flow as usual....
    HAPPY FATHER'S DAY!!! to all my brothers taking care of their sons and daughters...

    peace
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sierra.................sure print it show him and let him know
    how u love him so......A Father is a bond a man a protector
    he will walk da miles to see one smile he will teach from the
    light of GOD and rise above ...so as it's written
    HONOR THOU FATHER ........


    lpoet happy u did glad to see u in flow as we get ready to honor
    fathers

    MORE.....yes father's are the common structure of thou child

    bluewater.........all good under the eye of christ forth said thou
    father and unto u my son be as i am a man a father into ur son

    Rico...........yes i feel u as i too lost my father but his legacy lives in me forth i am of he whom mold the love & respect and set me
    to a path now i carry a piece of his rib unto my own children
    i am a man i walk like a man i work as man i teach as man a FATHER ....unto my children let it not be in vain!
     
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    skrybe ........yes they have time to put up with us and what we do as they continue the love and set us back on path
    FATHER's are the fullness of bond between son

    Nadia..........thank u FATHER's are part reason we all here


    unto the deadbeat dad's this day of Father's is something great
    wish u had this day to smile upon ...no ! no ! don't run sunday trying to pick up your son & daughter where was u yesterday?
    sit yo five dolla butt down before i make changeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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