Black Poetry : Fatherless Father

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am the result of a father who didn't care,
    and the strong mother willing to bare,
    willing to bare the resposibility
    to raise a fatherless father.
    To raise a fatherless father
    the way he's suppose to be.

    A fatherless father's child hood is
    painfull, hurtfull, empty, & scorched
    from A lonely, empty, hatefull divorce.

    So how am I to love the one that left me
    Still waiting on the porch for us to go fishing
    My heart is incomplete something is still missing
    Here I am Dad, my whole life, you missed it.

    Whatever happened to telling me
    Son go cut the grass
    Whatever happen to your advice on
    my first peice of @zz
    Now I'm older, you want to teach me,
    your too late, that time has passed.
    Momma raised a boy to a man
    without a Dad.

    Now I'm a father, taking care of my seed
    I'll teach her to love,
    Show her to believe,
    that on God's green earth,
    she won't be a fatherless mother.
    I'll do more than tell her,
    I'll show her I love her.

    You see momma raised a lover,
    & he learned to fight.
    Momma ain't raise me wrong,
    She raised Mr.right.

    So before you call me a momma's boy
    Or a bas-tard don't even bother
    because I'd rather be called a.....


    FATHERLESS FATHER !!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was deep emotions flowing....and I loves you too..
    but see i know that you i know who you are and how far you came
    keep ya head up...if to forgive but never forget it be ok
    but fo sho i know where you coming from....Angel
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I still have a long ride to take :car: until I get to where I need to be :thanks:
     
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    :kiss1: ........
     
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    Awwwww! :D That was cool Python!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Pan thanks alot my brother!
     
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    str8 up deep and heavy whewwwwww!!!
    i love the message and flow bruh
     
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    wow, loving this flow can feel all the raw emotion. flow on poet
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks alot my brother
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truth always rings of a tune that will be heard my sister and I thank you 4 your thoughts and time.
     
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