Quiet Poetry Lounge : FATHER

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  1. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My father I pray to thee
    For you are the light which enables me to see
    You're the vessel that keeps me afloat
    You give me the strength,may my faith continue to grow
    Father comfort me when I feel alone
    Give me guidance, when I think I'm on my own
    Give me understanding for you are my mind
    Carry me through troubled times
    Father show me the path I should take
    To do the right things in your name sake
    My father I pray to thee
    May your love always be within me
    AMEN
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And within you it is...it's called your "SPIRIT" ...
    very nice piece...keep it comming.
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AMEN,
    well done...


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done
    Amen !!
     
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    What a beautiful prayer, thank you for this.
     
  6. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May God forever hold us within
    BE SAFE
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely, lovely prayer. Thanks very much for sharing.
     
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