Black Poetry : father? no dad? no stranger? yes

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  1. Birddgurl2

    Birddgurl2 Member MEMBER

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    which one do i call you?
    i don't know you
    but you did give me life
    i dream almost every night about you
    every birthday my one wish would be to meet you
    do wishes come true? to me no because i still haven't meet you
    i think about the way you look
    the way you talk
    where you live
    and who is with you all the time
    i even still wish upon a star
    that i can meet you no matter how far i have to go
    no matter what part of my heart have feeling for you
    but how can you love a stranger?

    can someone answer me

    better yet can someone pray for me
    to meet my father, dad, but not a stranger
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave:Welcome to the Family
    of love and embrace
    this was a very heart felted poem
    flow ...let it flow
    looking forward to reading more
    of your poems
    Peace
    Blue
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's often very hard on people to grow up without a father..

    Curiousity takes hold of the reins and it seems to be a whirlpool of emotions....

    I been there sister, I know where you're coming from...

    Stay strong and keep scrybin....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com potic playground
    wow nice scribing poet happy u join us
    welcome to the family of love as we sho love
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My soul yearns with U, sister.

    Ask & ye shall receive.

    Very nice/sad piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Bluewater that this was very heartfelt. Hope to hear more from you, and welcome!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Camille, is that you?

    I love this peace!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I told you sista :)
    this family feels you
    Welcome :wave:
    and remember this is family...ya neva alone :)
     
  9. Birddgurl2

    Birddgurl2 Member MEMBER

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    thanks for everyones showing poetry love and input on my poem
    i have plenty more deep poems to post
    i will post them shortly
    thanks again

    p.s no sorry i am not camille
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:welcome to destee...
    very heartfelt piece here...
    flow on.....lookin for more
    to come.....
    again welcome to the family..:wave:
    Angel
     
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