Quiet Poetry Lounge : Father Can You Hear Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Apr 9, 2004.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Father can you here me?
    Can you hear my silent tears?
    The sadness rushing through me like a river.
    A whirlwind of confusion running through me.
    Father can you hear me?
    The winds furiously coming, trying to destoy everything in its path.
    The storm violently tearing down what's in its way.
    As a tornado comes and sucks everything up, so has the truth been sucked away.
    Father can you hear me?
    As a desert is dry, so is my spirit.
    I have not had food nor drink as if I've been wandering in the wilderness for years.
    Wandering in darkness, I cannot see the light.
    Father can you hear me?
    I have lost my sight, as though I was born blind.
    Flooding in the rapid waters of my sins.
    Consumed by the feeling of failure.
    I have disappointed my Father so.
    That choices that I have made, will be my destruction.
    Father can you hear me?
    The unspoken words I say everyday.
    Come swiftly and bring me back.
    Come quick as a hurricane and cleanse me.
    As a earthquake, come and abolish my ungodly ways.
    As before a storm, come calm my spirit.
    Father can you hear me?
    Come in, come dwell here again,come quickly.
    Father can you hear me?
     
  2. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds reminiscient of a poem I did called "Man's Prayer," I believe. This is truly beautiful. God bless.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet flowing i hear ya
     
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    The father is always listening, this was a very heartfelt piece.
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet sweet ...
    sister...

    i have wondered so manny times to...
    i hear youre cry....

    this was a verry emotionall heartfeld poem..

    But i can ashure you....


    that He hears you..

    hears youre cry loud and clear...


    but even the silent ones...

    we dont see him..

    but he is always there ...

    always ...


    as longs as youre close to him...

    he always listens ...

    and he is watching you always sweet....


    Big huge.....

    if i would pass you by on this moment i would give it to ya personaly...


    but to you know that god hugs you to...

    you will feel it after you cryed you get this silent peace moment...

    that when he puts his arms around you....


    after he has carried you trough all this...



    God loves you sweet...

    he listens...
    and he gives you strength..

    amen..




    LoveLibertylady:heart:
     
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