Black Short Stories : Fatal Attraction (Part 2)

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't believe that's who he chose over me. I look ten times better than her. Um, it must be her personality. (*laughing*) She seems nice. I wouldn't want to hurt her either. She looks as if she would have a nervous break down if that man ever left her. That's probably the reason he stayed with her and not me. He loves me. He just doesn't realize it yet. By me staying by them he has no other choice but to realize it now. Once I tell him about the baby I bet you he will leave her. What baby, you ask. Well there isn't really a baby but what he doesn't know won't hurt him, NOW.

    Look at him, standing there looking all nervous and ****, I thought to myself as I looked out the window at him and Felicia. As I looked at her I noticed something familiar. I don't know, I had the odd sensation that I had met her before. Maybe I had met her before for real and hadn't noticed it yet. It was just something about her. Oh well, I'll figure it out later. I told myself as I left my window ceil and walked in the kitchen to cook something to eat.

    I was glad that I was able to convince the landlord to let me move in yesterday. When my homegirl, also Termaine's personal assistant, told me he was moving into an apartment here I jumped on the opportunity because I felt it was the perfect opportunity for me to get Termaine back. He needs to realize that no other girl is going to love him like me and no matter how hard he pushs me to leave I'm going to stay no matter what because that is what a true chick is suppose to do.

    When I was growing up I saw how my mama let her only true love, my daddy, leave and I also saw the effect it had on her. She was a nervous wreck. She was always cutting herself cooking, smoking cirgarettes, crying, and beating the hell out of my sister and me. I felt sorry for her but seeing her like that made me never want to be like that. I was determined to never let Termaine leave me the moment I found out he could work me like no man could before. He was my soulmate and soulmate deserve to stick together, right? I just don't understand why he keeps running away from the passion and fire. It makes me sick. Oh well, I guess he needs more convincing.

    "Scooby! Scooby come here baby!" I called out to the puppy Termaine had gotten me when we first started out.

    Everytime I saw the mut it reminded me of Termaine. How could he have abandoned our poor baby like that. He didn't pay for the dog food, vet bills, or his dog house in my living room. What kind of daddy is Termaine to leave our poor baby like that? Oooo, how can I love him and not stand him at the same time?

    As he ran over to me I picked him up and looked out the window with him in my arms. "Hey, there go my baby. You see daddy?" Scooby barked. "I'm going to take you over to him tomorrow. You'll be seeing a lot of daddy from now on." I said as I rubbed Scooby harder and harder just thinking about Termaine until the dog cried out in pain and I realized what I was doing. I let him go.

    I can't keep going through this. I have to have him back. Ummm, yeah I got a plan.......

    To be continued...........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat's what i'm saying ......and now a master plan in effect to reclaim
    this getting juicy c'mon pt.3 i'm waiting sista ......all snap!!!!
     
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    Nice fatal attraction story. He moved in the same area. She plans on using hook like and sinker to get him. That poor dog, Scooby.. must be missing some hair on his neck from the hard rubbing she gave him.

    I have to locate part 1 so I can catch up.
     
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    ready for pt. 3 to this attraction that's fatal sis.....c'mon
     
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    Hold up did I miss something where is the next part of this story see you got me all into it, props to you, you always be doing your thang and I'm ready for pt 3
     
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    this was very interesting flow on poet.:star:
     
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