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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    him

    at age 11
    he started shooting guns
    aming at heaven
    makin clouds holy
    crushin rolly pollies
    while walkin with splif in hand
    he hung out wit older kids
    wit corrupt masta plans
    he rocked a white headband
    wit his white iverson jersey
    since he he was born
    his world was always dirty
    that's why he thought school
    was for the birdies
    at age 13 he had multiple sex partners
    and caught herpies
    he was heavily into petty crime
    stealing shirts off the ones not aware
    that this life could be a living nightmare
    until one day a cat he tried to jack
    did not want to share
    blaaaaw!!! blaaaaaw!!!! blaaaaw!!!!
    3 blast in the back
    made his body bare
    worst thing was
    no one even cared

    her

    at age 11
    she was messin with men age 30
    people who knew her would say
    you need to slow down shorty
    she's in foster care
    her tru parents are not worthy
    honeychile body is bangin
    and at age 9 her breasts started hangin
    she mostly slept with n!ggas that was slangin
    drugs and sex
    were her voodoo hex
    her has no time for children's text
    it was the phallic symbol she loved to bless
    too young to know that life is a test
    at 13 she was a ho for hire
    hyping off of heir-ron
    and nut on her chest
    later that year when she died from aids
    these were the last words that she manifest

    life is only a jest
    so takin yo time is some mess
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte...and so real...wow...i love it...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm...I have to agree with lovely...this is tyte...the realism truly evokes the readers emotions. This is what I consider
    effective writing...keep it flowing Poet!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeeeee!! so da young gun , bad boy blue
    str8 flat now nothing to do it's crazy how we loose
    so many to da street
    and she was str8 off da block
    doing dirt fooling wit jerks
    for a play a hit or two
    now going from da dew!
    lost souls so young
    this happen every day everywhere
    the truth been told in ya scribe of flow
    dis awesome tyte u know
    let it run da pen is on fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it is so horrible the life some of the children are going through,the children are our future some growing alone...i just wana cry... flow on my brother, thank you for keeping us reminded that we still have a way to go..we ain't there yet..flow on
    Peace
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    poetry....

    what's the use
    if you can't teach the truth
    to the young black youth

    thanks lovely, angel and blue

    rich...dude you flowed nasty on that piece
    thanks for blessing this thread with dat
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again you have blessed us with some powerful words. Keep doing ya thang. Much love

    poeticsoulsista
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it was u whom flowed da reality & truth of life
    as our young going down in da hoods cross da globe
     
  9. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo, you had me caught up
    in this poem....
    swept up in the fast line....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks fam
    tis a shame
    that not all have equipment
    for the game

    peace
    khasm