Black Short Stories : Fast Dayz

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  1. Love Child

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    "Hurry up, help me put him in the jeep!" yelled Kayla to her bestfriend Janece. The two young girls were struggling to lift the 185 pound corpse, formally known as Rahkim, into the back seat of a Range Rover. Janece quizzed her mind as she tried to understand how they ended up with two dead bodies.
    Less than 30 minutes ago all four of them were chilling, getting bent, and burning it down. "Now here I am dragging this heavy body with Kayla's crazy self" silently thought Necey as she glared at Kayla.
    Kayla was always getting Necey into some drama ever since they met in 6th grade. But never before like this, this cut the cake.
    Kayla on the other hand had no time to think about how it all happened, she already knew how it happened. Now she was busy worrying about what to do next. There was no way she was going to go to jail.
    Kayla repeated to herself in her head "It's okay just stay cool... follow the rules like on t.v... clean up all the evidence... dump the bodies... no one even knows we're here... we can get away with it... how hard can it be dudes around the way murk people all the time and don't get caught"
    Kayla tried her hardest to remain calm but being a mere age 16 it was hard to focus while holding a dead body. Just the thought of it erked her but she knew she had to be the strong one. Necey was the soft one and Kayla could see the fear in her eyes. Kayla silently prayed that Necey wouldn't break and snitch. She would see Necey and anyone else die before she would go to jail.
    After dragging Rah's body into the back seat, Kayla began frantically wiping the inside and outside parts of the jeep her and Necey may have touched. She had ripped off the end of the baby tee she wore. Kayla didn't care she'd rather go home with half a shirt then go to prison for murder.
    Necey stood outside of the jeep trembling with fear as she watched Kayla move around scrubbing like a mad woman. "Don't just stand there come on hurry up do you want to get caught?" "No" replied Necey. "Good then pass me the gun hurry!" Kayla ordered
    Necey carefully picked up the silver chrome piece of steel and passed it to Kayla. She took the gun and scrubbed all around it while being careful not to touch it, just like she saw done on Baby Boy.
    Once Kayla felt it was clean of any traces of her finger prints she rested the gun on top of Rah's slupmed body.
    She figured if jakes found the bodies it would look as if Ra shot his boy Crook. Kayla then exited the jeep, after throwing the gear into neutral, and used her foot to shut the door.
    "Come on hurry help me push it in there" stated Kayla as she rushed to the rear of the jeep.She hoped that the water from the pond would wash any trace of evidence that might have been left behind.
    Kayla and Necey pushed with all their might until they felt the jeep began to move, then they pushed even harder. The Rover slowly drifted off into the pond and the girls stood and watched it sink. Along with the jeep sank two men who they hardly even knew along with their innocence. There was no going back now for KaylaNecey, they were in it together to the end....
    To be concluded
     
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    this one here is coming out tyte love the story
    pt 2 please u really have a gift for short stories
     
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    Thanks Rich for all the support you've given me I really apreciate it. I was just playing around with something different and was'nt sure if I should write the second part but I guess I will.
    Thanks
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    wow!! please do
    u have a gift a talent
    use it to it's fullest write
     
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