Black Poetry : Fast and Serious

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Aug 15, 2008.

  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Earth the planet
    The pace is frantic
    Between a rock and a hard place
    Don’t take it for granite
    From the pacific to the atlantic
    Spiritual is the nature
    Material is the panic
    Creation of word like
    Goddammit
    Can you understand it?

    Fast and curious
    Deep into the mysterious
    Like I said the pace is furious
    Delirious
    Heat you to the core
    At your very purist
    Know thyself don’t be
    A tourist
    I’m serious

    Life and livin’
    The world keeps spinnin’
    Takin’ and givin’
    Righteous and the sinnin’
    Life has its up and downs
    So I find time to stay griinn’
    And

    Forgivin’

    ©mmviii
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    moving at da speed of light
    insane to da fight
    doing what's right
    brother this was mad tyte
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With hooks like this one...
    and this one...
    I have to say, word play to the max! I know that this would sound great spoken brotha poet.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a great flow Bro.. I like this
    you heated up the truth
    Life can be rough, and heated to the core

    You gave the advice one and many shouldn't ignore

    At your very purist
    Know thyself don’t be
    A tourist
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the world/whirl turns...so are the days of our lives!
    well ...uhmmm ...I always wanted to say that:lol:
    great piece brother
     
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