Black Haiku : FAREWELL......(Vaniku~V~Vankwish)

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Night fall your image
    appears before
    me all sad
    fancy
    free

    I see your glance deep
    i then lone you
    parted lips
    embrace
    me

    I would give my life
    for one minute
    of yo loves
    treasure
    chest
     
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    Melancholy you......
    Wish I could change
    Those blue eyes
    Back to
    brown


    As I look deeply
    Into those orbs
    Your essence
    Enfolds
    Me


    For just one moment
    Hypnotize me
    To linger
    In your
    Gaze
     
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    It's so hard to say Good-by to our yesterday
    cause I loved you in all and every way
    carried each others burden to heart
    now it's time for us to part?
    Is there any other way
    for me to have you
    just one more
    day?​

    If it appears that I'm pleading, then..well I guess I am​

    yes, I'm trying to savor our love anyway I can
    I want to inhale all the bad and good times
    for it was a time of both yours and mines
    Yet, now "farewell" sits at our door
    will I ever find love any more?
    I know it's time to go, but
    still I love you
    so.
     
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    For now my time pass
    if i could turn
    back a time
    before
    you

    My soul would mend in
    your embrace but
    forbidden
    i paint
    you

    Mt. Lovelett boldly
    like in rapture
    my time has
    pass us
    by
     
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