Black Poetry : Farewell to Love

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For us to touch would be against the rules
    Yet some would say denying our passions would make us fools
    We have waited for each other
    Longed to become lovers
    Yet when reality sets in
    We see that it’s impossible to begin
    You are tied to my soul
    The one to make me whole
    But for me
    You are not destined to be
    So again I must stand aside
    that what is right can abide
    Forever putting myself on hold
    To make sure destiny stays in control
    Can’t be selfish even if I tried
    No matter how much it hurts, or how much my soul cries
    I wave goodbye
    While staring in your eyes
    In them I see what might have been
    A world of love without and end
    Fading in the distant
    Your image now flees
    And I again stand alone to watch over Love’s Sea.
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one brought tears to my eyes,
    they roll down my face into that Sea of Love...
    Luv it
     
  3. Juicylv4u2

    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heyyy Bishoppppp :)

    you know love is not lost
    it's just tuck in the corner of ones heart
    for cherished moments :)

    yes in deed..you are Love's child :)
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

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    Knight of Nights...

    i've read this about 4 tymes
    today... each time i thought
    i knew what i wanted to say
    when i responded... but i didn't
    i still don't... but i knew
    it was time to say somthin'!

    this one moved me... it felt
    really real. thanks for the
    experience... flow on...

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this i can feel so deep and know to touch would be whewwww!!

    awesome drop to da farewell bliss
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How can a love like this ever be released? Like the poets before me, this one touched my heart. Wow....
     
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    love this drop sometimes it hard to let go the one thing you value the most
     
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    You blazed this one
    On lovers sea
    Nice piece poet
     
  9. LovNThySoul

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    Feel you on thise one serious Bishop.

    Like the flow poet.

    Peace
     
  10. Desert Storm

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    GOING DEEEEEEEP AND DEEEEEEPER! SPEAK ON DIS ONE BISHOP, SPEAK ON DIS ONE! I'M FEELING IT..... thanks for the read preacha! D.S.
     
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