Black Poetry : Far Away

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Off into the sunny days
    and smelling the scent from the buds of May
    Far Away somewhere no one knows
    Someplace where true love and a better life grows
    Smiles endless and joyfullness
    I need so much more of this
    The feeling of being far away when everything seems to be cool
    Love,Kindness...are the only rules
    Free from the everyday trauma and everyday life drama
    Spending time with your special other
    Making plans with your brotha from the otha motha
    This feeling so sweet don't want to let it go lost forever in the world I am in today
    That's why everynight before I lay I pray
    Take me away away ooooooh take my soul and make me whole
    Draw up a golden carriage
    Dream of a holy marriage
    To my one king solid without the ring
    Because he did that great thing
    With outstretched arms spoke to me
    Darlin' you are a queen
    So keep your head up and continue to dream
    Because there is a spot just for you right beside me..... :star: :star: :star:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully pose'd for thy King of love
    this here make me want a Queen now
    love how u gave life & reasons to love
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich I do my best, :wink: that just flowed out like water
     
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    This was such a sweet scribe, sounds like something we would all long to have.
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: watz....everybody will have it soon if they keep on living and trying :D
     
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    Very beautiful little sis!
    Knowing your creativity,
    you did'nt have to try
    very hard.
    Beautiful flow!
    Loving it!
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow.
    This piece reminds me of Spring
    Bursting with life
    Beginnings

    Oh yes I like this one.
    Maybe one day Spring will come for me


    Peace and love
    twision
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Moons and Twision....u don't know what your compliments mean to me
     
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