Black Poetry : Fantasy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Nov 4, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is a place
    Between time and space
    Where eagles trot
    And horses fly
    Where snowflakes fall
    In mid-July

    More than a dream
    I go there while awake
    Smiling to myself
    At the pictures I create

    Private showings
    Only I can see
    Alone in my world of fantasy
    A world only I can understand
    Where I can be a woman
    Or any kind of man

    Black can be white
    The sky can be the sea
    Anything at all
    Is what I want it to be

    BE

    © Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the sheer beauty of a world of our own making, our own imagination...

    which knows no bounds, no limits, no constrictions...

    and allows us to be free...

    K
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FANTASTIC READ

    Nice to know I am not the only one!
    But, then in order to create one must have IMAGINATION!
    And you have both talent and imagination!
    Keep doing what ya do!
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetry is the classic mechanism for fantasy. Thanks for feeling this.
    be
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    finalized

    u know BE..... so let us know keep flowin':)
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Allll Right! I liked the juxtaposition of contrast here--well done as usual--this had a real nice balance and rhythm that kept me tuned while I looked over ample scenery you provided--Ra


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