Black Poetry : Fantasy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Oct 3, 2004.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Nov 26, 2002
    Messages:
    1,601
    Likes Received:
    14
    Location:
    Rocky Mountains, High
    Ratings:
    +14
    With a glamce, I stare at her...
    Taking in every detail,
    storing it in my mental database 4 future reference.
    Secretly, I worship her beauty & elegance.
    I'm compelled 2 kiss the thought of her.
    I wanna get lost with her in the wilderness of ecstacy.
    Have her participate in the practice of taking deep breaths with me.
    Together we get succumb unyieldingly 2 each others
    dominating pins in a marathon match of erotic wrestling.
    Partners in the truest form of dirty dancing.

    I grip her hips as I slip my tip 2 the outer rims of her precious lips...
    slowly...
    Then gaze in her eyes as I thrust my guy deep inside,
    No need 2 ask if that's what she likes cuz her reaction is my guide.
    Rollin' my hips 2 caress her walls...
    Resortin' 2 the positions of the Kama Sutra & if she's game,
    we'll test them all.
    My testicles ingest her calls of pleasure...
    Sending an overload of testosterone 2 my doobie 2 be harder
    2 go deeper 2 make her wetter.
    Her nails scratch gashes across my back & @ss
    & although the pain is drastic, I let her.
    I'm not into S&M, but sometimes a little bit of pain makes sex a lot better.

    Then I feel her body quiver...
    "Faster" she whispers...I deliver.
    I give her every inch I possess
    like the next minute I might take my last breath,
    & I don't wanna leave her disappointed.
    So I begin 2 think of old ladies & little babies so I can control my stick
    so she'd enjoy it the way it's supposed 2 be enjoyed.
    Cuz prematurely ejaculating is 4 inexperienced little boys.
    Her sex noise tells me she's on the brink...
    So I clinch her nipple between my teeth
    & use my thumb 2 massage her cl!t 2 intensify her release.
    As our hips move rhytmically in sync,
    Our pelvises create a lustful beat until...
    I see my bus coming up the street.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    dis was phat ......catching da bus now !
    love the flow
     
  3. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,244
    Likes Received:
    14
    Occupation:
    Love my job!
    Location:
    Seattle
    Ratings:
    +15
    That was hot!! :welldone:
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Nov 26, 2002
    Messages:
    1,601
    Likes Received:
    14
    Location:
    Rocky Mountains, High
    Ratings:
    +14
    Thank U both 4 the feel.

    I was kinda hesitant 2 put this out cuz it's kinda graphic 4 me, but U know, the mind is graphic at its best.
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 15, 2004
    Messages:
    592
    Likes Received:
    10
    Ratings:
    +10
    now thats what i'm talking about postive, its getting hot in here. tyte flow
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Well now, you brought us right into the moment with this one. Very vividly posed. Flow on poet.
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Singapore
    Joined:
    May 13, 2003
    Messages:
    6,477
    Likes Received:
    110
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Servant of the People
    Location:
    Bay Area, CA
    Ratings:
    +131
    :eeek: mercy brotha when you cum back you jes dont play my goodness lol It was VERY mmmmmm :hot: :flamet: :D lol
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Nov 26, 2002
    Messages:
    1,601
    Likes Received:
    14
    Location:
    Rocky Mountains, High
    Ratings:
    +14
    Thanx 4 the read\words, my Queens.
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2003
    Messages:
    10,784
    Likes Received:
    4,235
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +4,472
    yooooooooooooooooooooooo.....
    i think of babe ruths chauncey racist @ss when
    da danga arises of cumin too fast....:lol:
    dude...this was spectacular....
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    5,322
    Likes Received:
    38
    Location:
    ~The hidden library...~
    Ratings:
    +39
    ...Oh lord :blush:

    I almost lost consciousness...

    *taking a lil sip a water*

    uh...Positive...I see you've received somekindawonderfultype INSPIRATION

    while u were away....:angel1:

    My dear brother...I'm having a heatwave, global warming...shoo

    reading work like this must be bad for me...because it feels too good... :slobber: lol...

    Much love,
    Sage
     
Loading...