Black Poetry : fantasy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Feb 20, 2003.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let your love fall and rise
    how heavenly you make me come
    to you so feverishly
    you are the devil
    so sinnfully

    i feel you touch
    and melt in your embrace
    everything i think of
    takes my breath away

    just surrending to your tenderness
    i fall and rise again
    tears only of pure extasy
    indulge in my fantasy
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you bringing it here poet
    i'm feeling your words poet

    get at me


    DSS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt dis tyme u casting it wide open!
    keep the ink droppin'
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful ma...!

    Reas
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for feeling this joints pplz... y'all come back now! ha ha ha
    sincerely,
    ds
     
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