Black Poetry : Fantasy Twist to Reality

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Over the river and thru
    the forest
    They climb the
    mountain
    to the plain pasture
    where harmony
    flows……
    as the sunset
    the moon rise
    starz dancing
    As they glance in
    each others eyez
    An angel sings a
    sweet melody
    as a seasoned
    dream takes place….
    Their spirits
    interlock as the
    moon beam
    shine upon them..
    he poses his love…
    on one knee…
    extending his hand
    she accepts in grace…
    as their
    hearts became one
    the starz begin to
    dance more
    as a tear of
    joy flows… as if it was
    the very first time..
    standing side by side...
    remembering the past…
    holding the present
    looking forward to
    the future.....
     
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    Oooohh, this is what dreams are made of.

    Very sweet piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da twist to reality of dreams
    wow !!!! this make me wanna dream and wake up
    to a reality sweet like dis ..........tyte scribe sistah
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset...ahhh thank you much love to ya glad ya likes...

    $$RICH$$..me and ya both lol..glad you enjoyed the read...means alot

    Olakuoto..thanks for da love....
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spin: :spin: :spin:
     
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    oh wow i love the melody harmony on this drop yes yes yes
    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne..thanks for da love....just glad your back with us for sometime..love ya...:angel1:

    Sister Bluewater..i am so happy you enjoyed this..much love to you and yours Peace...:angel1:
     
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