Khasm13 : fantastic....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dedicated to my ***** jdilla....

    i am the eargamsmic drastic fantastic neva plastic [email protected]...
    styles get mastered over footsteps plastered
    in time...the buoyancy of the beat bounces beautifully with the rhyme
    making you forget about being broke, drama and crime
    it's no joke...u can even ask ur mama about the stupid fantastic shine
    so...just to let u know...imma get mine, so u betta get urs
    the chant even soothes the curs and the hell hounds
    leaving both spell bound and attention nailed down
    like a heavy picture frame
    so deep...it makes it hard to forget yo name
    like i said...no drama so u betta get yo mayne
    cause the head nod leaves me no time to explain
    how emotions wane...but it's so fantastic so let the vibe take the blame
    and actually thas the reason why i came
    so i can watch dilla lord em while my boredom gets slain
    simple and plain...but now knowing ur a memory leaves me with massive pain
    most of these current fools that have some fame can't even turn in yo lane
    cause fantastic is how u played the game...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dedicated to one you love, the beat goes on.

    Always good to read you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    No doubt this was right in the hip side to one so close and dear
    awesome scribe brother K
     
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    Interesting! Put a smile on my face....
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It sounds real fantastic to me, knowing it takes you to scope it and work with it.
    Great piece poet, as always!!
     
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