Black Poetry : fantasies run deep.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Feb 25, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love you

    as much as i try to hide it
    ...deny it
    i can't quite...

    ...walk away
    from the thought of you
    i've come to know
    ...to love

    i lay and think of
    everyday happenings
    i've envisioned with you
    my
    hopes
    of romantic things
    we could do

    how you make my heart smile
    everytime i see you
    caught up in my opticals
    transported on a
    sentimental journey
    in my dream of you

    just me and you

    my life was written
    within the image of you
    so,
    it's gotta be
    true

    how
    do
    you
    defind
    love

    if not by the rise and fall
    of my excitement
    whenever you're near
    {skips and flutters}
    whenever i hear

    your voice
    is like an afternoon
    lullaby
    as i slowly drift
    away
    on a memory of
    yesterday

    i'd say

    i love you.

    {if only you were mine.:( }
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller,

    Very kewl flow my brotha!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller,

    As usual...a very beautiful flow. Scribe On Poet!

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    somebody gots to pass this piece on

    to somebody

    feel me
    cause i'm feeling ya

    peace
    play it like a baller

    dssNY
     
  5. blackfox

    blackfox Active Member MEMBER

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    Man, I'm feeling you on this one loving someone from a distance.
    Is a diffulcult thing to do.

    blackfox
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes...

    we run across would-be soul mates who are off limits...and we wonder, HOW COULD I BE SO UNLUCKY? hmmm.

    THANKS FOR READING ME.

    1
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was in the basement...

    rummaging through archives and found this. Me thinks it deserves another look-see from the poetry community.:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller...baller....
    Oh how beautiful this write is.
    How come I felt like I was floating as I read it.
    (sighs)....



    Much Luv & Peace,

    ~4EVER
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coco:
    Me agrees with you again. (As I exhale...)

    Much Luv & Peace,

    :heart:4EVER
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    super joint
     
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