Black Poetry : Fantascape

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jan 2, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take me away.
    Away from you,
    Away from me,
    Away to my own personal fantasy.
    Where I can be whoever I want to be,
    And where someone would genuinely appreciate me.

    Take me away.
    Away to a place where feeling rejected
    Is never expected.
    A place where in the midst of it all,
    I would feel protected.
    Where I could feel however I want to feel.
    And where all confessions of love would prove to be real.

    Take me away.
    Away to a place where
    My man would just appear.
    And he would come and take away every fear,
    And sensual moments we would share…
    As he whispers sweet nothings into my ear…
    And I would never ever want to leave there but…

    Snap!
    With one single flash,
    Fantasy and reality clash,
    Bringing me back to life as I know it,
    Cold, uncaring, and harsh…

    I think it’s time for me to go back…
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe poet
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think we all can feel this one...if only that fantasy was real...liked the way you put this together.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes ya write..
    flow on
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fantascape...

    I'm sure we all could use a few or more of those a year.

    Loves that title and really dig the content!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  6. mizjoice

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    Oh! that i were a bird, that i might fly away.......