Black Poetry : Fanatically

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its Ironic,
    I have a bad habit for this special type of
    chronic that makes me
    see illusions of she,
    and in she I want to be.

    See,

    Fanatic
    and addicted to you
    like sweet opium
    with a morphine edge.
    Somehow you got inside
    and I can't get you out
    of my head.

    A raw and
    earthy herb that
    cut me to the quick
    and knocked off some of my verve.
    Still I swerve
    and nerve, What nerve?
    I'm feeling like something
    truly unheard.

    A certain Je ne sais quois
    that keeps me
    speaking in a terrainian patois
    Its truly raw and uncut
    the way you leave me
    in this rut.
    Personified obsession
    for swallowing you
    and your everlasting passion,
    you are my personal hue,
    that I wear on this stage
    to perform when you give me
    my cue.

    Simply loving you fanatically,
    I'm addicted see?
    How romantically
    you infuse me with a feeling
    of reality and intense complacency,
    its like some dark drug or place
    that I inhabit,
    you belong to me and I've got to have it.

    Its something spiritual
    yet earthy.
    Complete and finished,
    yet beginning over and over again
    in a cycle,
    and leaves me slightly off-set and insane,
    But i'm cool with dramatically immersing myself in you
    ecstatically.
    I have no problem with
    loving you
    fanatically.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne Publishing"
    ~Dark Wynne
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this is deep! I'm vibin it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THIS awesomely tyte u in a mix
     
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    wonderful drop of the script
    keep it flowing
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the love from all of you. God bless.
     
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    I'm with gempis, you ceratinly bring a vibe to your poetry...another great one!!