Black Poetry : Fan of the Fast Lane

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Mar 28, 2005.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fan of the fast lane...
    Am I really though?
    Too fast, too eager,
    To take it slow?
    Am I trying to quickly,
    Turn you into my ‘best friend’,
    So that you could then,
    Become my man?
    Will I say then,
    That we just happened to grow close,
    When that was the plan,
    From the get go.
    Conversing every night,
    Going more into depth each time,
    But that’s just me.
    But apparently to you,
    That is a reserved status,
    And whomever you venture there with,
    Definitely matters.
    Me, making sure that you’re straight,
    In most of your situations,
    But I guess that’s another indication,
    That we already came to that stage,
    Where we can go to a totally different page,
    Boyfriend, girlfriend namely,
    But…what about the time frame…see???
    But it’s just easy for me to get that way,
    Is there something wrong with that?
    Is there a chart that I can follow?
    Time line, maybe?
    How do I take it slow?
    How can I tell my heart…
    ‘Take it easy’,
    When it’s so easy to fall in love with you?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    fast lane of heart sometime
    won't slow down this was well felt
    takes me back to the yesteryear
    of myself ......tyte drop
     
  3. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, I don't drive fast I fly too low...

    <floats in>

    Feeling this piece, and i can definitely relate to it (well from a male perspective).
    But hey, sometimes it's best to move slow, pay attention, and listen...

    Enjoyed the read!

    keep the words moving

    peace&1luv

    <floats out>
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this piece, thinking about intentions, outcome, and time frame, these aren't written in stone, and they do vary from person to person. Do flow on.
     
  5. BlatinaPoet4u

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    Sistah Chasity I think we've all become creatures of the fast lane at least once i loved ur flow. Keep flowin on sistah and imma keep readin! :bball: :bellydance: :dance:
     
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    Woo the fast lane..lawd I was feeling this...mayne...in the fast lane..you more likely to miss the beautiful scenery..and get into an accident...gotta keep out that fast lane..been there..wrote a book..Thanks for the scribe
     
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    Great to read you again, Chastity. This one's on and poppin.
     
  8. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks much for responding to my scribe...much love indeed. :)
     
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    hot!!!!

    hey i feel this alot. whoa i definately kno what your saying.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop enjoyed this...Angel
     
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