Black Poetry : Family

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 3, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Family is the reason. They teach
    us what we need. The plan was to
    have others. To help you through
    the deed. It is written in
    scripture. It 's cast deep in
    stone. If you want to learn to
    love , your family is your own.
    The gift of love, your mother
    teach. Your father gave you
    resolve. Your sister showed you
    how to dress. Your brother how
    to ball. They mean you well.
    They show you things. You carry
    to your grave. The lesson learned
    is your gift from them. Your gift
    you give your own.
     
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    i love ur flow, its so urban and real, man, this was tight!:love: :love:
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful..
    quote "The lesson learned
    is your gift from them. Your gift
    you give your own."
    well said poet. love of family
    Peace
     
  4. Khasm13

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    true indeed
    very well spoken
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully well posed loved dis scribe here
    keep flowin '
     
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