Black Poetry : Family Values

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 21, 2006.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay so when my darkest days would choke me like hangman
    had me beggin that the rainman would stop dancin
    around my equilibrium makin nightmares prance inside my brain

    I was scrabblin for an answer searchin for a solution
    to this depression that spread like cancer...
    when i found one...

    She was that African "queen"
    born out of the Saringete
    evolution incarnate
    pulled me out of my depression with ease

    Showed me how to act like a lady
    always in my corner always on my team
    showed me that i would ride that limosine
    go on to do bigger things...

    She was revolution
    turned my world around like
    amillion creations
    pushed me in the right direction

    and made me feel like "good times"
    good vibrations
    couldn't shake this chick
    and wouldn't want to if you offered me amillion bucks
    because she taught me Family Values,
    her name is queentswana
    and thats whats up...
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's the untold stories, I listen to most
    an amazing story...from coast to coast

    I planted nothing, that wasn't already there
    you got your own style, you got your own flair

    You are my future...a bright shining star..
    you light the world...wherever you are

    Whatever you do in life, do it well
    when we read..."the_story"...we can tell

    That you are the rarest ...of your kind
    one of the_story's ..utterly devine
    I love you
     
  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    that's a tight tribute...that's all love between sistas...im feelin that...great write, great tribute.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribe sis and the mixture of greatness the tribute and all
    tyte flowing wit feelings
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dis was truly sweet and deep
    i was feelin yo flo on dis cuz i go through depression as well
    i luved it
    so flo on wit nonstop
    frum yo sistah G.A



    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
  6. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well done scribe! and dedicated to a sister who is truly deserving of such a tribute. :lift:

    this 1 is touching
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo poet continue on with this flo please.:welldone:
     
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