Black Poetry : Family Funny poeticly yes man & shadow

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Drift low
    madness
    yet humble
    yes to the
    cost of da boss
    da man speak
    but da shadow
    loom behind
    motionless
    like a dark dot
    calling , running
    yes !
    to the tone
    seem like a
    copycat
    breakin sweat
    phat lines
    morning touch
    late night clutch
    da shadow follows
    close
    it's the yes man & da shadow
    like a 1 , 2 punch from da
    ripple of da tongue
    i've seen it happen
    i know the dot
    sitting round da clock
    watching
    waiting to
    follow
    to speak yes
    yes , yes !!
    it run like a puzzle
    mouth yes under a
    muzzle the two
    mix funny i see
    once turn and knock
    the shadow down
    how can one be standing
    but the shadow on the ground
    it's like a taste slap in check
    yes come out da man
    melts like butter under da sound
    holla yes wit no frowns
    who clowning who ?
    but all three is humble :luvv: love
    i can't even watch the final chapter
    i know it will be yes and da dot :lol:
    YESMAN & SHADOW
    i wonder if they fight :fight:
    who win coz u know u can't hit a
    shadow and u can hit yes in voice
    guess i'll jump around a bit
    coz i know who u are !
    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like the yes man comes out on top, but where did the dot come from, and where does it fit in? At the end of every sentence I guess. Hey, if I'm all up in a verse I want to know the players. Keep those flows coming.
     
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    da yes man and da shadow
    lol.........taken it all in
    a puzzle that fits together
    da bond
    da love
    da thought
    da gift
    exhale its
    da yes man and da shadow... :eek:hmy:
    and dont for get the dot....smh
    see its 4 not 3 :coffee:

    see now i know ya got issues :spank:
    Rich its a 2 drank limit..smh..:lol:
     
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    Lookin, QQ listening, Laughin

    Tyte drop Rich!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in darkness only a dark dot on the wall
    it's da shadow at call follow the human
    wit embrace but i can't see da smile to
    da face but under sunlight i see well
    and to me i can really tell and now again
    the yesman comes wit the reply YESSSSSSS!
    singing it like a lullaby from da grasp of voice
    it was da choice as many see to call thee da
    yes clash like a weapon of truth who knows
    so see it's really only three!

    Thankz y'all but i still wanna know why
    da yes & shadow mix so well when they
    don't go together can it be LOVE or RESPECT ????
     
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    nice drop rich..... i think its respect
     
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    hummmm! droc maybe ya right
    can it be both in mixture respect & love
    because i see da shadow moving
    with the body and at the same time
    i see the yes man holla YES to da
    sound and the human just standing
    their looking around !! lol
    something to think about
    as it flow in da mist of twist
    poeticly kiss of da two in one
     
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    ima take it up a notch- maybe is a need to survive- not love or respect
    the shadow cannot exist without mr yes- mr yes is its protector and creator
    he protest the shadow from da sun
    without man da shawdow is gone
    well besides him leanin against a buildin to chill til mr yes come back
    as for mr yes- his shadow is his freind- his companion
    wit out him- hes lonely and sad- his walk dont seem as strong- his stride dont seem dat powerful
    they need each otha
    lol
     
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    on point those two go
    hand n' hand like
    milk & cornbread
    yesman & shadow dot
    that both seem to
    hold a standard unknown
    yet felt , daroc u are
    about to help me put all the
    clues together and finally
    relate da poetic truth of
    a funny mystery !

    Thankz a million
     
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    i am lost for words
    cause i'm still laughing :)
    very nice my brother
    i'll be back
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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