Black Poetry : FAM!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Apr 6, 2002.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **(Fake Ass Mofo’s)

    i am so sick of all of
    the phoniness
    i am tired of the
    trifling lies&games
    perpetuated under all
    these different names
    & it’s total-ly insane
    ‘cause you remain
    simple & unchanged
    (& ain’t a **** thang
    you can do about it
    )

    your anonymity reeks
    of a cheap incognegro
    type essence & it’s
    probab-ly best that
    you remain suppressed
    but let me ask you this
    who the hell are you
    hiding from
    ?!!”
    (the hearts of men can’t
    judge you… that
    task belongs to God
    )

    so there your *** sits…
    forcing us to be
    unknowing participants
    or betta yet—
    Poets In The Midst
    of all of this…
    hidden indentity
    split personality
    secret agent man
    kinda **** & at 1st
    i just laughed… then…
    i had to write about it.

    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved

    **the view & ideas expressed in this piece are sole-ly
    intended for those who post under different names in
    an effort to "get ova" on or bamboozle others.
    (& you be knowin' zact-ly who you are!! :lol: )
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I read your flo and I can tell you feel very strongly bout this...so do I. But the fact is, "nicknames" do allow one to be two, if they so desire. They can be one way on the forum but in reality be a total different person. Anonymity is a type of power that can be
    abused in bamboozling others on a forum.

    But as you said...(& ain’t a **** thang
    you can do about it)
    Some will simple abuse this to no end while others simply want to remain "hid" for security reasons on the net, which is understandable. Maybe I'm stupid for not hiding, but I have a website and hundreds (maybe 2 or 3 thousand even) already know me there anyway, so I decided not to hide here. I do have others who use my computer, (and my email address sometimes) who hide and that's their choice. They say they do it for security reasons, which is very valid.

    This is a person's right, but when they harass others under a nickname or just plain be phony and post poem that their
    close friends wouldn't even believe they wrote (two-facedness),
    then they are hurting themselves in the long run, because eventually, they lose reality with who they really are in role playing.

    Your verse:
    your anonymity reeks
    of a cheap incognegro
    type essence & it’s
    probab-ly best that
    you remain suppressed
    but let me ask you this
    “who the hell are you
    hiding from?!!”
    (the hearts of men can’t
    judge you… that
    task belongs to God)


    This is a very thought provoking poem Elayne. Thanks for
    being bold enuff to scribe on this very quiet subject.

    Ya sista...Joyce
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    someone piss ya' off? I got an uncle who knows somebody who's a friend to somebody that's an important somebody. Maybe he can make an offer you can't refuse. Just kidding, what's up tho', somebody playing games internet'ually?
     
  4. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa! who twerked you??? wow...this be the sound of fury, but very well stated...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks.


    MsJ. you are absolute-ly correct when you say that
    a nick-name allows 1 to be 2 if they so desire... & i'm not
    knockin' it... as a matter of fact... i tried it (once). but i
    decided GA_Sunshyne was all i could handle!! :lol: but
    serious-ly... i'm not trippin' on anyone who choses to have
    multiple screen names for the sake of receivin' some peace
    & quiet when they just don't wanna be bothered or for any
    of the other reasons that you stated. that's why i made
    sure to add that thingy at the bottom. this piece is not
    directed at errybody... but for those who sittin' there feelin'
    like someone just kicked them in the head... umm hmm dats
    right... it's for dem!! :lol: as always my sista! i sho do
    appreciate you blessin' me with your presence!! & i thank
    you for expressin' your views so eloquent-ly. sometimes
    we need to know that someone is actually reading what we
    are sayin'. you've made my heart smile! :heart:

    Bro'Man. hahaha... thanks for the offer of your... umm...
    "connections". :) but it really won't be necessary. this piece
    is actually the brain-child of a discussion i was havin' wit a
    friend this morning... dats all. thanks for the read. :heart:

    DJ. "twerked"...? ain't nobody did nuthin' to me. i
    was just writin'. :D thanks for takin' the time.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    exactly what i'm sayin'.
    some peeps will admit they are living a cyber double life.
    i'd say just be yourself.

    j'hiah (did you know i had to add the apostrophe for someone had my name jehiah.)

    had to stress dat :D

    peace baby.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dayummmmmm!!!! look at u sparking a fire
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    DAAAAAMMMMMMNNNNNNN

    GA_
    you get 'em girl
    i got you

    dssNY
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soja. :lol: you got me, right? you 'ont think imma
    need protection or nothin' for postin' this do you? :)
    thanks for the read darlin'! :heart:

    $$RICH-NE$$. i'm simp-ly attempting to provoke
    thought. :) if somthin' catches a fie after that... i cain't
    be held responsible. (lol) :heart:

    Sherrie. you are crazee!! but i loves ya just the
    way you is. :D thanks for feelin' me! :heart:

    JP. you mean ta tell me that "jehiah" was NOT you?
    ohhh Clawd!! i'm serious... i thought it was! well ****!
    guess we learn sumthin' new erryday. thanks sweetie!
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayuuum Elayne...just tell that MOFO or those MOFOs then!!!

    :heart:
    GQ