Black Poetry : Falsetto Symphony

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soft-spoken like I am
    Don't make me less than a man

    I'm doing all I can
    To make you understand

    Play me like a symphony
    Stike up your band

    Better get the "Best of Me"
    Signed by "a friend"

    Moving might you profit
    Cash in hand

    Plagiarism mocks me
    But I'm still the man

    Original one man show
    Headlines read...

    Credit that falsetto
    Here it goes again,

    Baby, baby
    Play ME ~



    Darryl Abdu Omari :wave:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    This is tight......
     
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    You are one of my favorite channels on the satellite dish, darling.
     
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    dis was awesome playin at da harp of ya heart the tune is loud bruh!
     
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    very nicely done.... :spinstar:
     
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    Playing the tune that only you can sing. I like how you can say so much with so few words.
     
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    Sing that song for me!
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the title drew me in..
    then the terseness held me
    clear..tight...just right
     
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    Thank you.
     
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